I did my paper and got 163 out of 300 (54%). Now i have my teacher comment to improve my garde
I have to get at least 85% to pass the class
So, please make sure you can do it. Each changes or adding please use different color so I can easy see it.
You can see my teacher comment in the Rubric file.
Proposal Essay —
an essay in which the writer identifies a problem and proposes a solution, based on research-based grounds.
Follow all the tips I have offered you throughout the semester:
- Have an inviting title that is not the topic
- Have an interesting introduction — review the techniques we have studied
- Use strong research from databases
- Use Reader-based In-text citations
- Create a Works Cited page for MLA style
- End with a strong conclusion that convinces me I should care about your proposal