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A member came to my office to talk to me about personal loan for about $25,000 He needed for personal and business expenses. He was pre-approved for 10,000 visa and I talked with him about different options. He was not aware of our 1.9% VBT offer and how it works. After explained it to him, he was interested but hesitate about credit cards. When I calculated how much interest he could save with 1.9% and he realized that this is a great way for saving money. Since he was only approved for 10,000, we ended him to apply for 25,000 and we was approved. We were able to do a balance transfer for the member so he could pay off other expenses and use for business purposes.
He was so thankful for Members 1st service.